improve and deveop my writing piece

The task is to write a comparison for two argument paper, and below I uploaded my version of the paper however it wasnt good enough, therefore by looking at the comment and the rubric can you please improve and develop my paper, and I also uploaded the original two argument paper.

heres the link for one of the text (the other text ( What’s wrong with vocational school?) is in the doc below) : (My struggles with anti-intellectualism)

I was hoping to improve the introduction and my professor said I need more paragraphs that compare the 2 article on specific point, you can delete some part if you feel like is not necessary. Also takeout extra space between paragraphs please.

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