Your Task. Revise the following sentences to eliminate trite business phrases.
a. Pursuant to your request, I will submit your repair request immediately.
b. Enclosed please find the list of customers to be used in our promotion.
c. As per your request, we are sending the contract under separate cover.
d. Every effort will be made to proceed in accordance with your wishes.
e. If we may help in any way, please do not hesitate to call.
Your Task. Revise the following sentences to avoid confusing clichÃ©s, slang, buzzwords, and wordiness.
a. Our manager insists that we must think outside the box in promoting our new kitchen tool.
b. Although we got burned in the last contract, you can be sure we will stand our ground this time.
c. Beyond the shadow of a doubt, our lousy competitor will make another snarky claim that is below the belt.
d. If you refer back to our five-year plan, you will see that there are provisions for preventing blowing the budget.
e. BTW, have you heard the latest buzz about hackers ripping off customer info from Best Buy?