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I wanted to talk about the video editing ideas we sort of planned out the other day. Donâ€™t you think it would make a lot of sense to also add additional elements to the videos? I mean, I think that would sort of improve the quality of the videos as well as have a stronger impact on the clientâ€™s message.
For instance, we could add a dissolve transition on each video, which would then give it a seamless flow. This would then make the video cleaner and be more appealing in the minds of
the people. The impact would just be a lot greater and more appealing. This makes a lot more sense according to me.
What do you think?
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